Tuesday, November 25, 2008
NaNoWriMo Day 25 - 45,043 words
I'm still on track! Here's the worst bit of dialogue I could find! WTF?
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Fifteen minutes later there was a knock at the motel door. Callista opened the door and Lyle burst into the room. He looked her up and down and immediately noticed she was tip-toeing on her right foot.
“You hurt your foot,” he said.
She nodded. “Sprained, thanks to the KKK.”
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If this dialog were a painting I'd frame it and hang it on my wall!
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