Tuesday, November 04, 2008

Nanowrimo Day 4 - 6,709 words

Lyle continued. ”You allege that this here bus crashed, and that you and these alleged other people, heretofore referred to as passengers, were aboard this here bus?”

She nodded again. She would have said something if she knew what on earth he was getting at.

He made a note on his pad. “There any pigs on that bus?”

“Pigs?”

He nodded solemnly.

“Why on earth would there be pigs on the bus?”

“I don't know. I just thought it'd be funny if there were. Funny like peculiar.”

“I'm sorry, officer, I don't understand.”

He sat his pad down and looked at her, with his bleary, bloodshot eyes. “I'm just trying, ma'am, to assertify what transpired.”

Comments:
Genius dialog.

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