Tuesday, November 25, 2008

NaNoWriMo Day 25 - 45,043 words

I'm still on track!  Here's the worst bit of dialogue I could find!  WTF?

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Fifteen minutes later there was a knock at the motel door.  Callista opened the door and Lyle burst into the room.  He looked her up and down and immediately noticed she was tip-toeing on her right foot.

            “You hurt your foot,” he said.

            She nodded.  “Sprained, thanks to the KKK.”


Comments:
If this dialog were a painting I'd frame it and hang it on my wall!

Three days to go! We're going to do this thing!!!
 
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